NOTES BY THE EDITOR. SONNET I. THE first sketch of this sonnet was sent by the Author in a letter to his mother, when it had been proposed to him to write an Essay on his father's life and genius. Aliter SONNET X, page 12, lines 3, 4. And tinged by time like patch of snow in May SONNET XIII, page 15. This sonnet, with that on Freedom, page 49, are variations, and, as the Editor thinks, improvements upon those bearing the same name in the first volume,-if, indeed, they be not the original sketches. SONNET XIV, page 16. On this sonnet the author observes: "It was written in haste, and contains little more than a general hint, or perhaps a few turns of phrase." SONNET XXIII, page 25. The last six lines of this sonnet are thus expressed in what appears to be the first copy : Far otherwise the creed of her that made Another variation is as follows: The simple woman that hath written here Aliter SONNET XXXII, page 34. Once thou wast fair-God knows how long ago; Can make hearts ignorant of what they know. Aliter SONNET XL, page 43. I saw thee, Edward, when thy baby cries AMBLESIDE, October 8, 1840. SONNET XLIII, page 45, line 5. And every bird the pushing (sic) woods among, Aliter SONNET XLIV, page 47. Sweet lady, thou art come to us again: Old Loughrigg still is on his wonted seat; Still on the springy mound the young lambs bleat; (In that one article, not all the others) Which those brave shepherds held, who reared the towers, Nigh the moist cradle of the foundling Brothers, The faith that did in awe and love instal For many an age the Fig-Tree Ruminal. Page 88. The Anemone. The last line of this beautiful poem was probably written My lovely, lone, and last Anemone. Page 130. To Margaret, on her first birthday. The ninth and eleventh lines of this sonnet should have been punctuated as follows: Merely she is with God, and God with her; And her meek ignorance, guiltless of demur Page 152. Why is there war on earth? The conclusion is thus varied in another-perhaps an earlier copy: Aliter We have escaped from Egypt, but we lack- Spring armed hosts, all eager to be slaves, Page 319. Enoch. He walked with God, and like the breath of prayer So much he loved the Lord, his mortal clay Soft as a rainbow, joined the spirits that were A heartless corse to tread the earth below. The swift-foot ostrich stills its flightless wing. The above variations are believed to be for the most part earlier than the corresponding readings in the printed text. It is not often that an alteration is introduced into a poem, however it may improve the phraseology, without some violence to the delicate logic of feeling. Where any doubt of this kind was entertained, the Editor has considered it a matter of curiosity, if not of justice, to give the reader the opportunity of comparison. THE END. LONDON: BRADBURY AND EVANS, PRINTERS, WHITEFRIARS. |